A very good composition which captures the magnitude of space, the loneliness that can be apparent, the confusion & the intensity of the situation. However I have no idea if this is what your intentions were... You really needed to post a process journal with this so that I could mark it properly. You are an incredibly talented musician, but there is more to music than just playing. I sincerely hope that you unlock & ignite the whole passion that there can be for music so you get the full benefits of your gift.
Substantial - 5/8
ReplyDelete-->Composition is very good.
-->No process journal present.
Criteria B - Developing Skills 8/8
-->Composition is incredible, considering it's original
-->Evidence of amazing skill on piano
Criteria C - Thinking Creatively 2/8
-->No background info :(
-->No evidence of what your artistic intention was going into this project.
Criteria D - Responding 1/8
-->No ATL's or reflections :(
A very good composition which captures the magnitude of space, the loneliness that can be apparent, the confusion & the intensity of the situation. However I have no idea if this is what your intentions were... You really needed to post a process journal with this so that I could mark it properly. You are an incredibly talented musician, but there is more to music than just playing. I sincerely hope that you unlock & ignite the whole passion that there can be for music so you get the full benefits of your gift.
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